
When it first appeared
like a bright star,
its origin unknown,
we wondered at its beauty
like an emerald dazzling
through the weeks and months.
The star became larger, brighter.
After a time outshining the moon.
The star, although mesmerizing
in its emerald green beauty,
was sinister in its purpose.
Humanity upon the realization,
exploded in fear and violence.
Our leaders abandoned us –
taken to their secret places –
leaving us to our doom.
Months passed in panic and chaos.
the emerald giant filled our skies –
blotting out the sun –
filling the frightened world –
with its harsh green light.
Our world came apart.
North became south.
Great earthquakes tore the planet –
reducing our cities to nothing –
removing even the tallest mountains
from their places.
Magma flowed like blood from the Earth.
The seas began to rise –
devouring entire continents,
and still the emerald giant loomed.
Death reigned in its harsh green light.
As the months passed,
our world was remade –
now only a wretched ghost
of what it once had been.
The emerald demon began to recede
as did our sun.
Night and day were shorter now
and every day colder
than the one before.
The weeks and months passed
as the sun grew smaller still,
and the Earth ceased to be
transformed into a dark
frozen wasteland
as it spun slowly into the darkness –
untethered and broken.
By Phoenix Risen
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There’s mystery in space, and it’s frightening to think of how we put our trust in the Cosmos. I enjoyed your imagination, Phoenix! Quite an epic poem. The earth does put up a solid fight; even if it ended up untethered and broken.
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Never trust the cosmos!
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Metal as ffffffffffffffff, phoenix 😀
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Thanks Megaeggz! I’m all about the metal
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Intense. Loved it.
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Thank you so much Oglach!
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I’m going to be on the look out for an emerald star! Wish me luck.
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It’s on the way! 🙂
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O_O DAMN! That was very well written. I’m not surprised because it was Phoenix! I loved the imagery and just the way it was written. You can see things so clearly!
Very intense and very vivid! 🙂
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Thanks for taking a ride on the untethered earth! Where it lands, nobody knows.
Phoenix’s poem is amazing!
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Hey Sinister! Thank you for the kind words my friend!!
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No worries! It was great! ^_^
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Hey Slasher Friends! Thank you so much for posting my story!!
I’m sure this will happen any day now, so I’m stockpiling beer and tequila for the coming apocalypse. 😉
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No need to stock up on oranges and Tic Tacs, though!
You’re welcome. It’s a dark gem of a tale! 😊
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So nice of you to say that, I appreciate it!
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Hey Rose, thanks so much I really appreciate you supporting me and my weird stories!!
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My pleasure! Thanks for contributing your fantastic work!!
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50’s science fiction, done masterfully, black and white technicolored up! Really enjoyed it.
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Emerald stars are the best kind of stars! Thanks for reading.
–FlyTrapMan–
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Thanks Matthew!
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Reblogged this on Phoenix Risen and commented:
Thanks to Slasher Monster for posting my story The Emerald Star! Check out Slasher Monster for great horror fiction and poetry! Let the blood flow!!
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Cool! Thanks Phoenix. 💫
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