Her eyes were beautiful
The color of fine jade
Deep and translucent
Her skin so soft and white
Her hair the color of fire
Her voice like sweet music
From the first time I saw her
I knew I must have her
So perfect in every way she was
She walked alone, in the dark night
Lost in her own thoughts
I was mesmerized
I followed, not too closely
But close enough to smell her scent
Sweet like Jasmine and Lavender
Through the park she went
Such a sweet fool I said to myself
I feared for her safety, so I followed
As she approached the river path
I began to draw closer
So close now I could hear her breath
Closer still I came, so quietly
I could touch her now if I chose
Yet I seemed only a shadow
And then it happened
She must have sensed me
She turned around quickly
With a scream she backed away
I mean you no harm I cried
I only seek your safety in this dark place
She continued to back away
And suddenly fell backwards
Her foot having caught a branch
She struck her head on a rock
One of the many that lined the river path
Her blood flowed black in the moonlight
I ran to her and cradled her head in my hands
It was too late, the blood flowed freely
As I looked into her eyes I could see her fade
Those eyes, those beautiful green eyes
It was as if I could see her soul leaving
I couldn’t help myself I was transfixed
I held her for a long time
Wondering what beauty those eyes now saw
What wonderous miracles they beheld
And then an idea occurred to me
Insane it seemed at first
But this thought would not leave me
If I took those lovely eyes
Could I see that beautiful place
It seemed foolish but what if I could
Her life had only just passed
There may be still time
But I would have to work quickly
I took the small knife from my pocket
I always kept it razor sharp
As was my habit
And so I went to work,
Quickly cutting out the left
And then the right
Glistening in my hand by the moon’s light
They were even more stunning
Almost glowing
Steeling myself for the next task
I took four quick breaths
And pressed the knife into my right eye
The pain was incredible, unimaginable
And yet I was not deterred
Thinking only of the other world that awaited
Dizzy with the white hot pain
I finished my task and removed the eye
I set it on the ground, soaked now with my own blood
I continued on to the left side
My brain seemed to be on fire
Only darkness before me now
Dazed and sick with the pain
I began to wretch
I felt I would succumb to the darkness
I pressed on, my dream almost realized
I found her eyes where I had left them
Laying upon her breast, now cold and lifeless
I took the eyes, one in each hand
And slowly pressed them into the voids
Of where mine had been
The darkness took me at last
I slept, cold and dreamless
For how long I do not know
And then I saw it
A light, seemingly far away
The color of this light I cannot describe
As the light drew closer
I saw a shape in the center
Like a man, but different, disconnected
As the light drew closer still, I saw others
Not men but something else
Shapes, moving, like thick smoke
As they approached me I heard voices
But not like the voices of men
Like the sound of screaming under water
I cannot explain it, there are no words for it
The strange light enveloping me
The smoky beings surrounding me
Was this what her eyes had beheld
What have I done, what have I become
What evil is this
As the light surrounded me the color changed
A dark evil hue that I cannot describe
More felt than seen, if only I had the words
The strange beings were now upon me
They began to envelop me, to absorb me
The pain that took me was immeasurable
Their touch burned like a thousand suns
Like a gelatinous black oil
Covering me, filling me with their horror
In this I saw my fate
My eternity revealed
My sins had returned to me at last
And so I have become one with them
I am them and they are me
Forever imprisoned in this hell
*sigh*
Now this is true love, my friend. TRUE LOVE, DAMMIT!!!!!! (she shouted from a soft whimper in her heart that grew into a histrionic wail!)
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
5 out of 5 hearts on the love meter.
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The love meter is maxed out! Thanks for reading Phoenix’s poem.
–FlyTrapMan–
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Ah, yes, true love wears dead eyes! Lol. You’re a riot! Thanks for visiting!! It’s never a monster of a party without you. 😃😍
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You guys are geniuses!
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Flattery will always get you somewhere!
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Unique and gripping. I couldn’t look away. 🙂
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Phoenix specializes in creating poetry which grips the soul.
–FlyTrapMan–
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Phoenix is a master of pinning your eyes open, so you can never ever look away! Thanks for lending the monsters your gorgeous eyeballs, Og. I’ll put them in my jar. 😀💋
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Almost but not quite unbearable. ~~dru~~
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Dru baby, you have the stamina of steel! I’m glad (kinda) that you didn’t squirm too much. ☠️🌹
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Ooooo I squirmed but I still needed to read then end. So yup I have some stamina, this really did get to me though, the imagery is almost obscene and the thoughts of sin overwhelming. Evil or insanity? me
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We’ll take the evil or the insane Dru any day! Thanks for your visits. ❤
~PR
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Eye-yay-eye!
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What did one eye say to the other eye?
Between you and me, something smells. 😀
Eye-nose-Eye!
~PR
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Double eye-yay-eye! 😁
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Thanks for reading Phoenix’s poem! I hope your eyeballs didn’t bleed.
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Thanks for you concern. Eye will be just f-eye-n. Squeeze in an eye there somewhere.
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Hey Slasher Friends! Thank you so much for posting my story, I really appreciate it!
I don’t normally write such light hearted tales but I thought I would give it a shot.
Plus I was able to use the word “gelatinous” which was a bonus!
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The word, “gelatinous” always makes me quiver! Your fantastic, mind quaking poem was outstanding. Thanks for bringing your brilliance back to shine in all the dark corners of SMM! The monsters bow to your creative spirit. ❤👻☠️❤🤡😈
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No problem — thanks for contributing the poem, and you’re more than welcome to share more creations.
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Thanks Rose, you are too kind my friend! I really appreciate SM, and you have been such an inspiration to write better and bloodier!!
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Glad to have you on board, Phoenix! All us monsters appreciate blood. You just get better and better like sanguine wine. 🍷Many thanks and cheers! 👾💋
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Wow! I love wine! 😉
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Hell yeahs phoenix risen 😀
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The phoenix has risen from the ashes of creativity.
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Thanks! I’ve been laying low lately, I finally had to come up for beer, I mean air! 😉
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Reblogged this on Phoenix Risen and commented:
Thanks so much Slasher Monster for posting my short story “Dead Eyes”! Check out their awesome blog for awesome horror stories, poems and artwork!
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Thank you very much! 🌹❤
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Thank you!!
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Looking at LIFE through someone else eyes
Great piece of creativity
As Sheldon Always
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Lol. Exactly, Shel! Phoenix is a master of the dark. Thank you for visiting. 😘
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Love this!!
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Thanks, Lil Mermaid. Swim over anytime!
~PR
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