It was the fourth of July
The party seems to be finished
Wondering how long I dozed off for
Most of my friends have gone
A few bodies left, lying on the floor
Best I have a piss before I go
Now where’s that bathroom
Whoops, there’s a girl in here
Dressed all in blue, and she’s on the floor
Slouched in the corner, not moving
Her skin’s “a whiter shade of pale” *
Red lip-stick all askew
Then I see myself in the mirror
Agape, my white shirt’s moist and filthy
Splattered, deep dark red
Oh no! It’s human blood
I turn the crumpled girl over
Her pretty blue dress, covered in blood too
What’s happened, I can’t remember
Only blurry images of red, white, and blue
My mind goes numb
And my legs start running
Out of here in a hurry
“Thump”, I trip over
I thought that bloke was asleep
I didn’t notice at first
His red shirt’s also oozing out blood
Holy hell, he’s dead too
I’m stumbling through the front door
Grappling, panicking, now where?
Where do I flee to?
Think! Yes, a nearby Church
Has an early dawn service
A sanctuary for my burning fears
And bumbling into the Church I go
Settling upon the nearest pew
I’m white as a ghost and turn to see who’s beside me
An eerily stunning red-haired girl
Wearing a dress of red white and blue
Memory flashes back, it’s her, from the party
She’s staring at me now, with livid red and white eyes
I see fangs protruding over her blue lips
Dribbling fresh blood, hissing at me
She gurgles, “Did I miss one?”
The Filia Sanguine suddenly grabs my arm
And her dark-blue fingernails dig deep
I’m seized, I’m gone, I know
There’s no safe haven here
“Where do you go to my lovely”**
Screaming tears of red, white, and blue.
*A Whiter Shade Of Pale, a Procol Harum song title, 1967
**Where Do You Go To My Lovely, a Peter Sarstedt song title, 1969
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The patriotic colors in your cool vampire poem make me want to grill some burgers and hotdogs. Rare meat is delicious! Thanks for the fangtastic poetry, Ivor.
PR
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Thanks DD, and thank you to SMM for publishing my poetry gurglings. the artwork is frightfully good, and I’m reblogging now.
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Whoops Rose, we don’t seem to have the reblogg, prompt here. !!
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I’m glad you like the title card, Ivor. I’ll see if I could fix the reblogg issue, however, it could also be a temporary WP glitch.
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Yep , I understand, a WP glitch !!
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Wow, Ivor. I’ve had some rough nights at parties, but none like that. At least not that I can remember…great stuff, really entertaining.
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Thanks Oglach, it was a surprise party !!
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Ivor’s poem will bite you in the neck! Watch out.
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Awesomely Awesome and brilliantly brilliant!! The reblog issue is a WP glitch supposedly being worked on.
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Thanks Walt for the awesome compliment,
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You’re very welcome!
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A great imaginative moment of horror! Thanks for the read.
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Thanks Sheldon, and I’m horribly pleased you read my poem.
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Your Vampire poem grabbed me, Ivor! Thank you so much for your dark side. It flourishes here on SMM so well, and all the monsters keep it watered and fertilized very nicely. Bloomin’ fangtastic!
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Thanks Rose, It was a follow-up to my original poem over a month ago.
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/01/07/red-white-and-blue/
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I had to step over colorful bodies just to get to the comment. Well done.
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Haha! thefunnyauthorblog
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Hope you turned on the bright white light first. Wouldn’t want you to get your blue shoes, splattered with dark red blood.
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Lol
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I would never like to attend such a party! Awesome poem and great artwork…. 🙂
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Thanks for visiting, Mani! I’ll grab a glass of sanguine wine for you. Cheers!!
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Haha…cheers!
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The party was going fine until I fell asleep, and missed all gory action.
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Haha… I would rather be happy to have fallen asleep… 😀
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Lol..
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oh my god that was so awesome
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Hey, thanks for stopping by, Josh! Hope no eggs cracked over Ivor’s scary poem.
PR
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I can think of two lol
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Thanks for reading my gory slashing.
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Well done Ivor
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