I want to be buried with you.
I don’t want to wait until we die.
In our small box,
we can lie
on top of each other
so close that your ribs press into mine
every time you take a breath –
every time you move against me.
Our eyes will never adjust to the darkness.
We will fumble forever with beginner’s hands.
My breath will be your breath.
In our cemetery, we’ll have neighbors
who are silent –
who never bother us.
I will place my feet
under the soles of your feet
to warm them,
and we will never be cold.
I think having a place where neighbors won’t bother me would be prime real estate. I like being cozy but having to share a tiny coffin isn’t exactly paradise to me. Still, I loved this poem by Chuckie (Crow) who is a poet, not timid exploring the places we only usually visit in our nightmares. Superb poetry, Chuck!
~PR
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“I will place my feet
under the soles of your feet
to warm them,
and we will never be cold.”
These lines sold me! I hate cold feet, so if being crammed in a casket with Brad Pitt is the way it has to be, then I guess I can make that supreme sacrifice 😀
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This is actually romantic, in a weird Boxing Helena type of way, but better. Nice.
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I loved Boxing Helena! Good call, Og! Creepy yet hypnotic.
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Hopefully, neither one is claustrophobic
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That would suck. Who knows, it might cure that person after they lose their voice from screaming. 😵
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I enjoyed the poem! It was nice, and for me at least, oddly calming.
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I can see how calming this poem would be for you. No one is killing someone…. Yet! Lol. 😱
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Hey. I know the guy who wrote that.
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Chuckie! Thanks for being part of SlasherMonster Magazine AGAIN. I bet you feel like the guy who died and went to heaven — twice!! Lol.
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It’s true. I have two halos two sets of wings now.
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Haha. You need two sets of wings so you can fly — on account of having such a very large vocabulary. 😊
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“We will fumble forever with beginner’s hands.” Love this!
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Chuck sure has a way with words. Thanks for visiting SlasherMonster Magazine!
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Oddly Beautiful…the most romantic poem I’ve read in awhile. ~~dru~~
My instructions for MY box are very, very, different. https://saywhatumean2say.com/2013/10/31/instructions/
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Thanks for stopping by and admiring Chuck’s poem. I loved your poem, too, by the way. I’m gonna ask Matt to read it, as well.
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Not exactly the way the Egyptians did it, but close. When the Pharoah’s kicked the can, many of them took their brides with them.
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Yeah, I read about that. I believe they took their slaves, too. That would be a horribly slow and lonely way to die; being entombed. Shivers.
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Yeah, talk about creepy. I guess the Pharoah’s never heard you can’t take it with you.
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Yeah, tut, tut for them! 😀
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Sweet and twisted!
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Just like pulled taffy!
~PR
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I find it superbly romantic! A beautiful way to express love, deadly, fatal, LOVE ❤
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Crow man did a fabulous job! ❤
~PR
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