The man with the knife grins. Serrated edges dangle above a crawling body while a bullfrog croaks on top of a dead tree stump.
Laughter spews out of this man’s mouth. The body flails its fleshy fins like a fish ripped out of a pond…helpless…only so much time left…
He snatches a handful of hair, and then smothers the face into the muddy earth. Dirty hair embraces between his talons while he lifts the head—gooey globules drip from clogged nostrils.
The man with the knife drags him toward the pit.
The body slides down a muddy maw, and then drifts into a sea of fur and teeth. Little hands carry the body as if they were waves whisking away a piece of driftwood. A scream sits in his mouth while nipping incisors excavate into the bleeding throat. The sea of little hands crawl, tear, and chatter the song of a million bites.
Whoa!
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I know, right? Watch out for incisors!
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Your story reads like macabre poetry — such picturesque speech! Lol. You know how jealous I am of your stories. I also like very much how the creatures in the pond aren’t named — they can resemble anything that fills our hearts with terror. Bravo, Fly. ❤
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A hamster pond would tear a man to pieces…I think.
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I can’t Like this – it’s terrifying!! 😱 😀 🐛
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Exactly! I can’t imagine mud all over my suit. Gross.
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Whoa, this was creepy.
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Nothing like a herd of creepy-crawlies to brighten up an otherwise dull day. Thanks for the grin your story elicited. 😀
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A herd of creepy-crawlies makes my skin crawl!
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YOUR skin crawl…somehow, I find that to believe. 😀
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Wow. I forgot to breathe while reading this. Fav line “…gooey globules drip from clogged nostrils.” Love the sneaky humor.
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I vomited in my mouth while writing that line…yuck!
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Good! I liked it
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A little mud never hurts!
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Scream!!! You’ ve got an imaginative mind… quirky! 😉
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Thanks! Don’t get bit!
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Welcome! 🙂
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