
Wade Hackette lets the rain fall inside his black convertible as he lights a smoke. Lightning ignites a purple spider web above the rusted city, illuminating hollow towers of cement. Wade exhales a gray specter while raindrops fall off the edge of a brown brimmed hat. He parks the black convertible next to Jade Dragon—a greasy restaurant that can be smelled (and tasted) from a block away. Wade pulls down a fire escape ladder and climbs to the top floor.
Wait.
Something is wrong.
The little lamp on Wade’s desk is on. Wade never leaves the light on.
Never.
Wade Hackette places a calloused hand inside of his long trench coat and wraps bandaged fingers around Sinorita. He takes her out of his pocket and places a wide back against a soggy brick wall. Wade peaks around the corner and looks inside the window.
No one.
He wiggles the window open, and then sticks a big dripping boat inside his office — raindrops drizzle over documents and photographs sprawled all over his desk.
“Damn it…” Wade whispers.
Wade straddles over his desk while Sinorita’s glossy barrel sways from side to side. He plants both boots on the carpet and spins around. A shaded figure creeps from the darkness and stabs something into Wade’s back.
He turns around and points Sinorita at a woman’s pale face. Blue eyes and blood red lipstick, she keeps her pointer finger aimed as he rests her head against Sinorita’s barrel.
“You wouldn’t want to pull the trigger on me, now would you?”
Wade’s finger glides against Sinorita’s trigger.
“You shouldn’t break into another man’s office. You may get hurt.”
She prowls around his desk, and then lounges across a vacant corner.
“You look like a really busy person…you must be who I’m looking for.”
Rain drips from Wade’s brown brimmed hat.
“Forgive me! My name is Sammie Redding.”
Wade closes his eyes.
“Now…let’s not let a little thing like a name get in between us.”
Wade Hackette places Sinorita back inside his trench coat pocket.
“It won’t.”
Sammie opens a desk drawer and takes out a pack of smokes. She strikes a match, and then walks toward a nearby window.
“…This rain…it will never stop.”
She places the lit smoke on the edge of a glass ashtray — silver smoke entwines into an orgy of twisting strands.
“I’m looking for information…and someone needs to die.”
Wade’s brown brimmed hat eclipses his face.
“A man of few words! Perhaps we’ll get along just fine. Take a look at this photograph I took.” Sammie says.

“I need you to steal a piece of paper from someone. Don’t worry about what’s written on it. Go to Hellmouth Lounge. A man named Dirty Desmond will be there tomorrow night—7:30pm. He will be dressed in a red suit and flanked by bodyguards. Dirty Desmond is going to exchange this piece of paper with a woman dressed in black. You can’t let this happen, understand?”
Wade picks up the smoldering smoke and takes in a long drag. The orange ember eats through the filter.
“You want him dead?”
Sammie laughs.
“No!…I want the woman in black to be dead by 8: 00 pm tomorrow night.”
She takes the smoldering smoke from Wade’s fingers, and then snuffs it into a pile of ash.
“I’ll return in a few days. We’ll discuss payment.”
Sammie drags a jeweled fingertip down Wade’s chest, and then shuts the door behind her. Wade lights another smoke while pulling back the edge of a curtain.
Sammie Redding crosses Grime Avenue and stands underneath a dying streetlamp. A silver car rolls to a stop. She opens the door, slides inside, and then the silver car cruises out of sight.
Wade sits in a chair behind his desk. He had never been inside Hellmouth Lounge, but the stories he heard make him feel like he goes to Hell every weekend. Located on the north end of Grime Avenue, the entrance lights can be seen from blocks away, attracting all types of inebriated assholes.
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I like the title card you made with Hackette! Neat-o!! I almost drew Hackette with canoes for shoes since you described them as boats. Lol. That would’ve been perfect, right? 😎 Exciting story– Is Hackette gonna really kill a woman?! Intriguing.
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I referred to Wade’s shoes as boats? Hot damn! That would have been funny if you made canoe shoes.
Yes. He’s going to kill her. Shit! I didn’t mean to give too much away. Oh well. Just kidding.
–FlyTrapMan–
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I should’ve made his shoes canoes and not said anything; just see what you’d say. 😀
He should kill her with a —
cold hearted snake. Lol.
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Haha…wow! I wasn’t expecting that.
–FlyTrapMan–
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(dancing)
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I still have the song stuck in my head!…this is going to be a long night.
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Really? Lol. I’m sorry — not really. 😊 You can practice your sword training to the song in your head.
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Don’t encourage me!
–FlyTrapMan–
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To Be Continued…my favorite words! It means there will be more for sure yes?! Xp
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If I had it my way, then this post would have totaled around 35 thousand words. But that would have been rude…so the story will be continued many times.
–FlyTrapMan–
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HAHA! YAY! I love to hear that! 🙂
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Can you dig it? You’ve both outdone yourselves here. This is gonna be fun.
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Rose’s depiction of Wade Hackette and Dirty Desmond breathed comical life into a comical story! Stay tuned.
–FlyTrapMan–
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I will indeed stay tuned. The writing is great. “silver smoke entwines into an orgy of twisting strands.” I wish I’d written that line.
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Thanks! It’s a shame that secondhand smoke is bad for us, haha
–FlyTrapMan–
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A mystery and a man of few words. A noir soiree saute , , , I’m attuned to your next tune/toon.
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I was thinking the same thing (noir) when I thought of this concept back in 2011 — I’m glad you enjoyed the first episode!
–FlyTrapMan–
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Holding my breath till I turn blue for the next episode.
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Great story
Love the voices you have created for the characters
As always Sheldon
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I’m glad you enjoyed reading the first episode!
–FlyTrapMan–
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I just did one also
It’s called Mylo for sure
You should check it out
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Cool! I’ll check it out tonight.
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Just what interests me: filthy crime. Clean crime is dull, like a wallflower at a party…but everyone wants to dirty dance with filthy crime. Looking forward to the next episode. 🙂
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Filthy crime is the dirtiest kind of crime!
–FlyTrapMan–
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Yes, low-down-drag-through-the-gutter dirty…only way to get dirtier is go down in the sewers, but I stay away from sewers because clowns like “It” hang out there. Nothing on this earth scarier than a clown.
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“It” is actually some kind of interdimensional creature which imitates a tangible form of people’s fears…very dirty!
–FlyTrapMan–
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Inter-dimensional creatures are the absolute worst…covered with dirt from lord-knows-how-many dimensions.
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Totally hooked! Let the continuation begin ASAP 😀 I don’t want to die of curiosity…. 😛
The illustrations are great… 🙂
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Thanks Mani! Matt can spin a tale that hooks and throttles you. Lol. Have a lovely weekend. ❤️💋
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❤ …
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Your enthusiasm is encouraging! Please don’t die of curiosity! I better post the next episode soon.
–FlyTrapMan–
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I am very intrigued, Dead D. Who is going to be killed and why? And most important, how? A mystery! xx
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Wade Hackette never tells his secrets!
Thanks for reading!
–FlyTrapMan–
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